lunes, 13 de abril de 2009

My favourite piece of technology


My favourite piece of technology is my refrigerator.Since I was born, there was one in my house.Last year we gave our old refrigerator to my grandmother and we bought a better one, wich is bigger than the old one and can do ice :D. It's cool. I use it for saving food. Every day, I go to my kitchen and I look for something to eat. My refrigerator always has something for me. I like it because it saves my food and eating makes me happy. If I hadn't a refrigerator I couldn't eat things like ice-cream or meat from one day to another, because they wouldn't be on good conditions. My refrigerator lets me enjoy dessert because he can saves and take care of them for months. I love my refrigerator, and if I hadn't one, I would suffer a lot. My life would be a nightmare, because I love food, and the worst thing you could ever do to me is get rid of a great dessert because it has gone stale. My refrigerator is my happyness.

3 comentarios:

  1. it's very nice when we open the refrigerator and it has something for you , it's very sad when we open it and it's empty, but affortunatelly it don't happend frequenly
    see you in class!

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  2. Hi Pancha! I love my refrigerator too and as you I have the same since I was born, but in my case I haven't changed it so it doesn't make ice very cool...jajaja
    See you on monday!

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  3. Francisca,
    That´s a fine post. It sounds fluent and has humour in it, as if you were talking about an old friend. Please compare your version to the one I’m sending.
    My favourite piece of technology is my refrigerator.Since I was born, there HAS BEEN one in my house.Last year we gave our old refrigerator to my grandmother and we bought a better one, wich is bigger than the old one and can MAKE ice :D. It's cool. I use it for saving food. Every day, I go to my kitchen and I look for something to eat. My refrigerator always has something for me. I like it because it saves my food and eating makes me happy. If I hadn't a refrigerator I couldn't eat things like ice-cream or meat from one day to another, because they wouldn't be IN good condition(-). My refrigerator lets me enjoy dessertS because he can save(-) and take care of them for months. I love my refrigerator, and if I hadn't one, I would suffer a lot. My life would be a nightmare, because I love food, and the worst thing you could ever do to me is get rid of a great dessert because it has gone stale. My refrigerator is my happIness.

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